morbi:

clicktogoback:

WIP? IDK. Needs work, will likely get more work… BUT PEOPLE SHARE WIPS RIGHT?? Crits obviously welcome though there are some things (A COUPLE MAJOR CONSISTENCY ERRORS like the halo and the guy’s arm) that I know need work aha. ALSO I GUESS THERE SHOULD BE A LEADING UP SEQUENCE because I know this happens really fast urp.

there should probably be flames or a smoke something or something SOMETHING that I’m incapable of doing with my current crappy skills

she of course wouldn’t actually be able to touch him while he’s not in ~mortal form~ but I wanted to draw his wings goin SHOOP sdfj

HAHHGAAFKHK KATE WOW

Your art is super nice first off. Like seriously.

Okay so check it. I don’t know how to pop this into photoshop and draw over it. Try to animate things in curves and arches. It’s really important for readability. Primarily with the angel dude. I’d try pulling his upper body downward and have his lower body follow in a curve.

Like that! The wings could probably be secondary actions if you wanted. The halo could benefit some from delay too. A frame or two extra. Maybe cushion the start of the fall.

I think maybe the devil girl transforms too fast. And don’t hesistate to trace/copypaste things that are inactive. Her feet are a little jittery. I think her head turns back and forth too fast too. I’d either keep it at one angle or hold the turn a little longer there.

Looks good beyond that. Take your time and keep at it!